June’s Story–Another Chance to Vote!
As I mentioned before, next month I’ll be writing a short story and releasing it in parts (as I’ve done previously) to celebrate the publication of the mass market version of Once Bitten, Twice Shy. I’ve decided the most fun way to go about this project is to ask you to choose when the action occurs. I’ll be tallying votes until the end of May. At which time I need to know which you prefer:
1. I want to read about the time before Jaz partnered with Vayl, when he shadowed her during one of her solo missions in order to decide if he should take her on.
2. I want to read about an assignment that took place before Once Bitten, Twice Shy, but after Pete put Jaz on Vayl’s team. Maybe I could learn a little more about the origins of that incredible chemistry of theirs that way.
Can’t wait to hear what you think!
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May 21st, 2009 at 5:57 pm
A huge vote for #2!
One is interesting, but two will show more about their character, personalities and their first impressions of each other.
May 21st, 2009 at 6:09 pm
I think it would be great to learn what Vayl’s very first impression of Jaz was without her knowing that he was there. People often behave differently when they’re alone and don’t have to worry about anyone’s opinion about them.
May 21st, 2009 at 6:18 pm
You are SOO good to us! I would love to hear about Vayl spying on Jaz before they officially partner up. It’d be interesting to see if Vayl’s attraction is instant or does he try to convince himself that she’s just interesting because of her talent. Hee hee. Let the speculation begin!
May 21st, 2009 at 6:39 pm
#1 allows for better possibilities. Seeing Jaz work without Vayl around could have her working with a different personality.
May 21st, 2009 at 7:04 pm
I know, both of them lol
One from before they partnered could be good. See what Vayl was thinking, where Jaz was at just after Matt’s death etc.
May 21st, 2009 at 9:53 pm
NUMBER ONE!!! WOT WOT. . .
Can I vote for two?
If it makes you feel better, for a day and a half with my friend, I pretended to have multiple personality disorder.
May 21st, 2009 at 11:04 pm
I know that this comment doesn’t help but I really can’t choose. I would very happily read either of them.
The chemistry and craziness that comes with Jaz and Vayl together could be matched by Vayl’s stalker capabilities with maybe a few close calls involved.
I can’t choose so someone do it for me!
May 22nd, 2009 at 2:53 am
huuum both
May 22nd, 2009 at 2:58 am
huuum both are really interesting !!
But learn what Vayl was thinking about Jaz before being his partner is very exciting !!
May 22nd, 2009 at 5:11 am
So close, but I choose #1
May 22nd, 2009 at 5:28 am
So TOTALLY #1!!!!
OMG! I NEED to know!
May 22nd, 2009 at 5:57 am
Okay, so far #1 is winning by nearly double the votes, but we still have several days. Let your voice be heard! (And thanks in advance–lovin’ the feedback!)
May 22nd, 2009 at 6:26 am
Ooooo. It’s like choosing between the marshmellow or the chocolate on a smore…… Ummmmmmm crud. Could we get one now and one later if were really good?!
Ok….1.:grumbles about making decisions:
May 22nd, 2009 at 6:53 am
Ooh, both are good choices, but it’s got to be #1. To see Jaz through Vayl’s eyes and get his first impressions (and when he immediately became smitten, no doubt). We can guess what qualities made him decide she was the right partner for him, but I want to hear it from Vayl.
May 22nd, 2009 at 6:54 am
#1!!!!!!!! ^^ I shall also be doing One More Bite for a book report because it’s really easy to write about your characters! ^^
May 22nd, 2009 at 9:11 am
Gotta vote for number one! Always wondered what Vayl thought of Jaz before the partnering.
May 22nd, 2009 at 12:16 pm
BOTH! C’mon Jen, I dare you to do both (;
May 22nd, 2009 at 1:06 pm
it’s a hard choice, they are both so tempting! But i think i would like to read about number one! i am most intrested to see what Vayl’s first impressions of Jaz were. And also i would love see things from Vayl’s perspective.
May 22nd, 2009 at 2:14 pm
Yepee! Can’t wait!!!
Ok, now, you can’t give us such a coiche and pretend we just choose one, Jen! I’d love to hear about the second story and see how the chemistry began. But I’d really like to hear the first one too, because I really liked it in the last story you gave us where things where seen from Vayl’s point of view. What about using July as well? lol
May 22nd, 2009 at 2:25 pm
Both look good but I vote for option one. Would be interesting to see it from Vayl’s POV and to get a chacne to see inside his head.
May 22nd, 2009 at 2:35 pm
I would totally LOVe to read about #1! It would be very interesting, not to mention funny, to read about Vayl with his incredible stalking abilities. And I would also love to see how Jaz would solve a case on her own as well as how Vayl would be following her and what he would be thinking. But, I’d love to read one from #2′s time as well.
May 22nd, 2009 at 3:40 pm
2 sounds good… but kind of too like the other missions, i think 1 would be the best, show us what jaz was like before she met vayl!!
:)
May 22nd, 2009 at 10:14 pm
Um…yeah I’ll take a number one please!
Hee hee Can’t wait, this will be awesome. You rock Jen!
May 23rd, 2009 at 1:38 am
1. I would love to know why Vayl picked Jazz. What it was that made her irresistable to him.
May 23rd, 2009 at 1:40 am
Also, I already got such a kick out of reading about their first “interaction” that ended in Jazz’s kiss.
May 23rd, 2009 at 2:26 am
#1… I really want to know what Vayl’s initial reaction to Jaz was. Was he instantly attracted? What were his thoughts? Ahh… all the possibilities.
May 23rd, 2009 at 2:50 am
#1!!
Gonna jump on the bandwagon here; just love to know what Vayl’s first impressions of Jaz were. It would be from Vayl’s point of view right??
Can’t wait, i just love these little stories!! They’re like delicious bite size snacks in between meals (with Bite marks being the next meal, can’t wait for that either!)
May 23rd, 2009 at 7:06 am
Oh Jennifer why do you have to think of such good ideas. Both sound so good … but by the tiniest weeniest margin I’m gonna have to pick 1. And don’t let me change my mind. Agh I hate decisions
May 23rd, 2009 at 10:18 am
I would love to hear lucky number 1. Its always fun to read about things that happened before the current books, and, I think, this might be somewhat pivotal to understanding their relationship.
May 23rd, 2009 at 11:29 am
the second one sounds like the one i’ve been waiting for!!!
i’ve only just come back off holiday and we had NO internet connection (bugger) so one of the first things i did when i got back on the computer was to check out my favourite website (this one).
and i found all this great stuff that i missed. oh.
at least i’ve caught up now. so my votes for the first choice.
how have you been jennifer?
x x x x x
May 23rd, 2009 at 11:30 am
the second one sounds like the one i’ve been waiting for!!!
i’ve only just come back off holiday and we had NO internet connection (bugger) so one of the first things i did when i got back on the computer was to check out my favourite website (this one).
and i found all this great stuff that i missed. oh.
at least i’ve caught up now. so my votes for the first choice.
how have has everyone been?
x x x x x
May 23rd, 2009 at 11:30 am
the first one sounds like the one i’ve been waiting for!!!
i’ve only just come back off holiday and we had NO internet connection (bugger) so one of the first things i did when i got back on the computer was to check out my favourite website (this one).
and i found all this great stuff that i missed. oh.
at least i’ve caught up now. so my votes for the first choice.
how has everyone been?
x x x x x
May 23rd, 2009 at 11:31 am
I’d love to read about # 2, but # 1 sound also very interesting. So whatever the result, I’ll be happy
May 23rd, 2009 at 1:44 pm
Both
May 23rd, 2009 at 8:07 pm
It’s soo hard to choose I would love reading either,but I think #1 would be rly fun to read about. I would rly like to know what Vayl thought about Jaz before he actually met her,and if it was “love at first sight” lol.
May 24th, 2009 at 12:27 am
1# sounds fantastic. Mainly because i can think of how paranoid jazz would get if she realized a super hunk was following her. (remind me never to say super hunk again :S)
May 24th, 2009 at 1:36 am
ONE, ONE, ONE! Definately want to know if Jaz ‘knew’ she was being shadowed and how it would peev her. And as most others have mentioned, Vayl’s initial impression of her.
Oh man, how much fun it this! Ms Rardin, you are too good to us
May 24th, 2009 at 2:55 am
Commenting again on why it’s definitely #1. It’s because this time this is going to be in Vayl’s perspective, his voice.
May 24th, 2009 at 3:16 am
number 2! number 2!!!
May 24th, 2009 at 4:57 am
definetly number 2
but then again i would probably love the first option too
lol too hard
May 24th, 2009 at 7:57 am
It’s so hard to choose! Everything you write is just so much fun!
May 24th, 2009 at 8:44 am
both sound really interestin but i fink no.1
leave no.2 for l8r lol
May 24th, 2009 at 8:57 am
Love to #1
May 24th, 2009 at 8:57 am
Love to hear more about #1
May 24th, 2009 at 11:27 am
Big vote for #1! I always wondered why he chose her and his brief explanation to her just didn’t seem to be enough. Either one you choose though will still be fun to read! Thanks!
May 24th, 2009 at 9:16 pm
I echo most of what I’ve read so far and vote for #1!
May 25th, 2009 at 12:06 am
I’m totally for #1!!
It would be awesome to see how Jaz was before meeting Vayl. I REALLY want to see what his first impression was!!
May 25th, 2009 at 2:23 am
Number #1. Option two is appealing and would be exciting if gets chosen but I would love to read about Jaz before her partnership. Love your books, xx
May 25th, 2009 at 5:08 am
How much do I appreciate your amazing response to this request? I am literally bouncing in my chair! Seven more days to shout it out, my friends!
May 25th, 2009 at 9:47 am
Both of them sound really amazing… such a tough call! I’m going to have to go with Option Number Both?
Really, though, I’d have to say #1.
May 26th, 2009 at 1:30 am
definitly #1
May 26th, 2009 at 1:38 am
im a complete sap sooo i pick the second one. haha *hides*
May 26th, 2009 at 3:16 am
Number One for sure.
May 26th, 2009 at 4:11 am
#1 please!
May 26th, 2009 at 4:44 am
Definately Number 1, please.
It would be very, very interesting to find out what he thought of Jaz back then. Especially how she deals with all the drama that had been dropped into her lap with the Helsingers being so new to her then.
May 26th, 2009 at 6:08 am
You guys are surprising me. I thought you’d prefer the second option, but number one is winning so far by a two-to-one margin. Interesting!
May 26th, 2009 at 6:38 am
I’d be happy with either one or two!
I mean come on everyone it’s Vayl & Jaz!
I will take them any way I can get them.
XD
May 26th, 2009 at 10:20 am
#2 for sure – Although I want to know why Vayl picked Jaz and what he thought about her I want to know how he was sure and how their feelings sparked – you can always combine them maybe have Vayl think of how Jaz acted.
Love your books!!!
May 26th, 2009 at 1:33 pm
Nr 2. What color were his eyes that time I wonder??? (Amethyst would be interesting
)
May 26th, 2009 at 11:35 pm
DOUBLE WOOT!!!! SO #1!!!
i’d love to hear about vayl shadowing (stalking) jaz. with jazez vampire sencing abilities that could be a difficult task…i wonder if he would be the cause of one of her car acsidents. you know because she was sencing valy and thinking he was her target vampire…
May 27th, 2009 at 7:53 am
I’d vote for both if I could… ^^;
You know what, I do, even though that cancels out my vote in the first place.
May 30th, 2009 at 1:27 pm
Grr, I’d love to know about their very first assignment together, but I’ve always wanted to know about Vayl’s first impressions of Jaz, hmmmmm…
Gotta be number 1!!
May 31st, 2009 at 7:26 am
ahhhh i can barely wait!! wen r u gonna put up the first part???
May 31st, 2009 at 8:55 pm
Soon, Eimear. I’m going to start outlining tonight.
June 18th, 2009 at 1:38 pm
I would say number 1 because like Jacqueline said it would let us see vayl’s first impressions of jaz